I just came up with a an opening for a story that I have been thinking about. It was a line in a poem of mine, but I decided to use it in a story. This is what I have so far. Should I change it? Tell me what you think:
Everyone was shocked when I died. I guess they thought that I would make some sort of noise when I went. A gasp, a cry, a whimper or at least left them some foot prints in the snow to follow, something. Yet, I didn't do no such thing. So this was how I ended, fighting, but not making a sound.
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